John E. Smelcer

Poets as Translators - John E. Smelcer

 

Essay:

(1) Poems from a Vanishing Language
 

Poems in Ahtna and English:

 

(1) T�ade Yenida'a -- The Virgin's Tale
(2) Hwtsiil Tidangiyaanen -- Weir Fisher
(3) Ggax Kuna� -- Near Gakona Village
(4) Son�Tsaane� -- Falling Star
(5) Sneyaa -- Loneliness
(6) C�etsesen -- The Writer
 

 

 

John E. Smelcer

Poems from a Vanishing Language

AS THE SON of an Alaska Native father and a part-Cherokee mother, I have had influences in my life that rarely touch the fabric of non-Indian lives. Although Alaska is certainly not as television oftentimes portrays it -- either in the rather surreal Northern Exposure or in adaptations of Jack London novels -- it is nevertheless a great and diverse land of extremes, of millions of lakes and hundreds of rivers, of the highest mountains in North America as well as the coldest places, of vast and dangerous oceans and icy seas. It is a place where moose and caribou outnumber the population of humans.

This is the land of my heritage. My father is a half-blood Athabaskan Indian. His mother is the last in our family lineage of pure blood Indians. At around eighty years old she is also one of only about ninety surviving speakers of our language -- Ahtna. Ahtna (distantly related to Navajo) is one of thirteen dialects within the Athabaskan language group. In fact, about 5% of our nouns are loan words recognizable in these related languages, even in Navajo thousands of miles to the south.

Virtually all of the remaining speakers of our language are elders. Very few young people speak it. Several years ago, I myself began to take a keen interest in our Ahtna way of speaking, realizing all too clearly how fragile and precarious our language and traditions were and continue to be. For example, I noted through research how nearly one-third of our speakers died each decade. Surely our language would not survive the next twenty years if more members of the younger generation did not take an active interest in learning and preserving Ahtna. With this in mind, and having two Indian grandmothers to teach me, I began to learn this very beautiful and rare tongue.

Then, within the past two or three years, I began to experiment with writing poetry in Ahtna. It is quite challenging. As a writer, the process for me is backwards. Usually in English I have an idea of what I want to write about and then proceed to write about it, my language choices seemingly unlimited, given the gigantic vocabulary (hundreds of thousands of words) of what is in fact my mother tongue-English. But because the other language of my heritage is so limited in terms of the number of words (perhaps only a thousand are known) I must first start with the words and let them determine my poem's direction. What will they let me say?

The process goes something like this. I have a notecard and notebook collection of terms, variations, and phrases. I clear an area on my living room floor and lay out the notecards in rows of relatedness (place names, other proper nouns, common nouns, verbs, etc.) and then start to isolate noun and verb phrases that might go together. Then I look for proper nouns and place names to complement the phrases. After a while, a kind of linguistic string begins to take shape, and finally I lay all the cards out in sentence order (remember sentence structure exercises from high school?) to start to piece together lines. Meanwhile, throughout the process, one side of the notecard has been in Ahtna, and the other side has been the English translation. It's a slow and sometimes tedious technique, especially with trying to follow this linguistic string simultaneously in both of the languages, but it is truly a process of discovery. I generally have no idea of what I will write before I begin.

So, am I the translator of my own poetry, or am I writing my poems in two languages simultaneously? Probably both. I will say, though, that at times I have had to stray from the literal, even if both versions did arise in my own mind. For example, in my poem "Son Tsaan" ("Falling Star"), the literal translation of the phrase "Son Tsaan" would be "star shit." Quite simply, it appeared to my ancestors that a shooting star was the night sky excreting upon the earth! Somehow, though, in the English version, to translate the phrase in a way that would retain the original metaphor would skew the poem as a whole away from its linguistic and dramatic string. I had to make this single word choice be further away from the original in order for the two poems themselves to be closer.

I am currently the only member of our tribe writing poetry in our language (let alone translating it into English). While I mentioned that there are a handful of Native speakers of Ahtna, only one or two can even recognize it in written form. In fact, there was no written form whatsoever until after university linguist James Kari, in collaboration with dozens of tribal elders, established an orthographic structure for Ahtna in the early 1980s. In the same way, although there is a rich heritage of Ahtna traditional stories-all with powerful poetic elements-my poems are the first writings in the language which would fit the European-derived classification of "poetry."

As for the Ahtna pronunciation, it would take a 25-50 page linguistic discussion to even begin to provide a pronunciation guide. (In fact, the dictionary to our language devotes forty-seven pages to explaining our pronunciation and orthographic system and is still somewhat incomplete, even inaccurate, in many instances.) What could I teach in a few paragraphs or even a few pages? After studying our language for years, I barely have a grasp of pronunciation. True, there are some correlations to Standard English orthography, but many of our sounds are distinctly unique from English as are the patterns between spelling and pronunciation. For example, the word in Ahtna for "hammer" is "c'tsiiti'" (ka-chit-e). Who would imagine c' = ka and ts = ch?

This year my tribe appointed me as the Executive Director of our Indian Heritage Foundation. Now, as the elected "culture bearer," it is my job and life duty to document and preserve our traditions and language. With the guidance of the village elders, my work includes oral history projects, dictionary revision, documentary film-making, and even the creation of language books for our children. I also see my poetry in Ahtna as another starting point-a place from which others may one day follow, keeping the word alive in a vanishing language that-despite our great efforts-still remains at the brink of extinction. --Anchorage, Alaska, August 7, 1996

 



John E. Smelcer

T�ade Yenida�a


Nhw�el nahwgholnicde
yenida�a tiyhda�a,
yenida� atah kughileltah--
s�el dahwdghitaey�.

Na� oox yen ts�ezdaann, kultsaenn
tikiyaasde daetl�.

Nat�aan�delaeyi lults�ikalael
t�aa k�ay� giis kanghilyaan.

Gha yen denae du� u�att� iinn
naghale�e� kiilnii
t�aede laa.
Tl�adaa�a sezyaa bene
nansoghe ba�ba� xugha dannolyaey
nildaak�e tikiyaasde
xutah c�etsendelnen.
Yihwts�en xugha�en stanacnel�iinn
tse kay�dalnen.

Konts� aghade hwlazaann c�a xu�el ts�eneyel
yen kaskae xughe kenaes
xona kaskae xona igge� dakidaetl--
kaskae na� oox yen
ts�ezdaann.

Hwnaghe nilhual� aen.
Yank�tnelnen. Denaegge� ledases.
Nuuke� nihdelnen
T�aede sighilyaal
igha�ane sdyes yen.
Kaskae zel el� yuut
"Nen yaene� �ele� txisdliile!"

T�aede nak�.
Koldze� nihwdelnen
del nikalt�uut�
nen� t�aaxdze� c�e�sdedlii.

Yahwdelnen el� kaskae uyii tkudyaak.

 



John E. Smelcer

The Virgin's Tale


Let me tell you a story
from many generations ago,
back in legendary times--
so long ago that the language
is hard for me.

A girl observing the puberty ritual
went into a menstruation hut.

The autumn wind, nat�aan�delaeyi,
"that which carries leaves,"
blew beneath a full moon.

This chief, who had many wives,
saw this girl and wanted her.
He went out to the edge of the lake
and left a gift of dried salmon
at the door of the ritual hut
where an odor drifted among them.
Then he crept away before the sun rose.

She stayed inside for seven days
until the chief spoke to her
and they went into his house--
he and that girl
who had just observed the puberty ritual.

Inside, they looked at each other.
He flirted with her. He winked at her.
They stood so close together
she became scared
and escaped from him.
He ran after her yelling,
"You cannot do it only by yourself!"

But when he caught up she had vanished.
All that remained 
was her blood soaking into the ground
and a voice coming up from that place.
Someone was singing beneath the surface of the earth.

But even after the sky cleared the chief mourned.

 



John E. Smelcer

Hwtsiil Tidangiyaanen


Tadlzuun tl�ogh k�eltsiinitl�ogh dghelaay cene�
tehwdeldiyna da�snidaetl natu�.

Pedni tehwedeldiyna nilk�aedze� ghot�
tse sdaghaay ogltsii;

tse Saghani Ggaay �cen�iis neke�e �et nekeghaltaexi�,
tse kayaxygge ogltsii tabaaghe k�eze.

Pghatsiitsen baes hwlsiil, c�etiyi ya�atse
k�e dghelaay cene� k�eze tehwdeldiyna

yenka dldaek ts'ilghu,
yen dldaek.

Pghak�ae luk�ae i�nilaex, c�etiyi nic�ayilaan glts�aek�e �uyuunistl�en
hwna yanlae baa pk�e�e�lc�et� yikaa.

 



John E. Smelcer

Weir Fisher


Flowing out of green foothills
the shallow stream enters the sea.

It began its winding course
long before these banks were cut;

before Raven stole the stars and moon, 
when no village stood along these shores.

Below the stone weir, an old man waits
like the hills along the creek

for what the stream will soon bring
or what it will take away.

Once They arrive, he will lift his thin spear
while gray clouds slow the speed of light.

 



John E. Smelcer

Ggax Kuna�


Bendil Ghaxen
cagheandze� gge� nesdyaa
son� yikaas k�edghildzaxi gge�.

Uts�e� lkec�endeli nay�aaye�
xaydilk�aan naats utanay �tnelk�aani.

Ggaek sok
yaykaas nadghik�aan
nildzikedel yikaas k�edghildza�.

Yaykaas nadghik�aan nhwdghik�an�
Bendil Ghazen, tsitnitggas.
Ggax Kuna� yaak.

Yehts� en k�a �ele� xodze� lnakutniile.

 



John E. Smelcer

Near Gakona Village


Bendil Ghaxen,
Chief of Tazlina Lake Village,
awoke from his sleep
before the morning star had risen.

It was November, Uts�e� lkec�endeli nay�aaye�,
the month after birds gather to migrate,
so he built a fire to warm his soup of blood
and fat and the liver of a rutting moose.

Just then he heard Raven's caw
and the Northern Lights appeared--
zigzagging across the sky
in the failing light before dawn.

Where it touched the ground near him
that place was burned
and the Chief's hair turned white.
This was long ago near Ggax Kuna�, Gakona Village.

It has not happened like that again.

 



John E. Smelcer

Son�Tsaane�


Tiyhda�a
Ba�ane Ts�ilaaggen Tak�adze�
nilyaats.

Tsaal K�aas
tidangiyaanen
tic�aniyaa

ti�aasni�aan.
lts�ii dilliy.
Ikeghiyaa

nic�a�i�yaa
yai� tezyaa
ldahwtniniyaal

kol�ii ghiyaa.
Iyiits� kenildogh.
Hwtnitl� iits�

Tsaal K�aas
nic�a�ilt�uus, dghelaay zdlaen
son� tsaane�.

 



John E. Smelcer

Falling Star


A long time ago
during spring on Klutina River
it began to snow.

He-Who-Trains-the-Chinook Wind,
an upper Ahtna Indian war chief
and expert hunter

went out into the forest
on birch snow shoes.
The wind was strong.

He came upon a great tree
which he climbed.
He ascended the tree

for many days 
until he was out of sight.
In the distance, a cloud

moved against a mountain.
Darkness fell
and when He-Who-Trains-The-Chinook Wind

jumped,
he became
the first falling star.

 



John E. Smelcer

Sneyaa


Tsets daghael
sii ben deltaan
dazeni kedadetnes.

C�et�aan �unetniigi,
k�agi delk�ac.

C�isnatse dakuditniis,
ts�elbae ti�diniggaats�
sii sedze�.

 



John E. Smelcer

Loneliness


While packing firewood
I came upon a small lake
and loonsong.

Flowers blossom,
a pika calls from a rock.

Suddenly there is a noise.
I am alone again.
Loon dives into the water.

 



John E. Smelcer

C�etsesen


Dahwdezeldiin� khot�aene kenaege�
ukesdezt�aet.

Yaane� koht�aene yaen�,
nekenaege� nadahdelna.

Koht�aene kenaege� k�os nadestaan,

lukae c�ena ti�taan�
Tez�aedzi Na�.

Sii c�etsesen--
sii sedze�.

Sii �e koht�aene k�e kenaes,
dahwdezeldiin�.

Sii ndahwdel�en, dandiilen,
dayn�tnel�en.

Sii kahwtel�aen,
sii �e nekenaege�nadahdelne kenaege�.

 



John E. Smelcer

The Writer


I am beginning to write in our language,
but it is difficult.

Only elders speak our words,
and they are forgetting.

There are not many words.
They are scattered like clouds,

like salmon in Stepping Creek
at Tonsina River.

I do not speak like an Ahtna,
but hear the voice of the spirit,

hear it a distance
speaking quietly to me.

 


 

 

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